It was nice!
There are some improvements that can be made, however.
Your English, and grammar should be written without mistakes. Sorry for that one lol
Also, instead of clicking the button try making it so when dialog comes, all that has to be done is to press Spacebar or something.
Other than that, I'm sure the story will build up better as it goes. I personally think that this flash is on it's way to a good start! Keep making them! :D